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Hello
Hello friends, I have been here for two or three days, I'm surfing in this site in order to find new people and new cultures.
I find this site great.
I will not let this opportunity slip through my fingers.

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- Hello friends, I have been here for two or three days, I'm surfing in this site in order to find new people and new cultures.
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- I find this site great.
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- I will not let this opportunity slip through my fingers.
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