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  • Nonsense Complex

    • Recently I wrote about having a talkative companion and I didn’t have a friendly view on it and considered it as a trouble.
    • Basically a trouble just doubles when the number of trouble making element doubles, however I’ve found that “two talkative companions” is a blessing!
    • (or are blessing) They just talk together and let you lurk and take your time.
    • You can jump in and out whenever you feel like to do.
    • They always find something to speak and you can have either of these attitudes: Be ashamed that you are not sociable enough to do the same, or, feel guilty that you don’t pay them enough attention and go deep into your own thoughts.
    • Sometimes I see myself as a stupid person to just follow the suit and bring on more nonsense and at the same time, I think if I don’t do it I would feel like a cold and distant person.
    • We may call it “nonsense complex” ^__^

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    • Basically a trouble just doubles when the number of trouble making element doubles, however I’ve found that “two talkative companions” is a blessing!
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    • Basically a, trouble just doubles when the number of trouble making elements doubles, h. However, I’'ve found that “two talkative companions” is a blessing!
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    • (or are blessing) They just talk together and let you lurk and take your time.
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    • (or are blessing)¶They just talk together and let you lurkrelax and take your time. [Keeping together in the sentence makes it sound like 3 people are in the group, with one not participating in the conversation].
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    • They always find something to speak and you can have either of these attitudes: Be ashamed that you are not sociable enough to do the same, or, feel guilty that you don’t pay them enough attention and go deep into your own thoughts.
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    • They always find something to speaktalk about and you can have either of these attitudes: Be ashamed that you are not sociable enough to do the same, or, feel guilty that you don’t pay them enough attention and go deep into your own thoughts.
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    • Sometimes I see myself as a stupid person to just follow the suit and bring on more nonsense and at the same time, I think if I don’t do it I would feel like a cold and distant person.
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    • Sometimes I see myself as a stupid person to just follow the suit and bring on more nonsense and a. At the same time, I think if I don’t do it I would feel like a cold and distant person.
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