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    • Please, correct me :) just thoughts

    • The evening is born.
    • Late in the tired sun the river of my memory flows...
    • It's not the best beginning I suppose.
  • But one should start.
  • It was a lucky day for me.
  • Under the dull colourless sky I saw long lines of children with flowers in their arms as colourful as you can imagine.
    • The headmaster was in her high spirits ans let me go home early.
    • The time is worth more than money.
  • Maybe all is not so bad.
    • At least this school is just 5 minutes' walk from my home.
  • Some people spend hours to get to work...
  • I'm obviously lucky.
    • So it was one of my first work days as a school teacher of English.
  • Sudden turnaround of events.
    • Everybody knows I tried to keep clear of this job... but in vain!
  • A lonely boat is making up the stream.
  • When you are in the river there are only two ways in fact: up or down. I was upset.
  • My movements were not fast that evening.
    • And steel armour was heavy once again... Damn...
  • A traveller covered a long distance at day time but at sun set found his own track.
  • Now I'm hundred paces behind myself.
  • It's painful to realize.
  • But the funny thing is that .... an upset boat is still floating.

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