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The world goes around me!
Long ago people believed that the universe went around the earth!
Of course after so many years of scientific observations and researches, we now know that the earth goes around the sun and they both turn around some other celestial object.
In a way we all believe that the universe and all other humans go around us, which technically means that each of us assumes that he/she is The Center Of This World.
^__^ I just wonder what happens if someone proves that we are not the center.
Will we kill the one the same way our ancestors killed Galileo ? ^__^

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- The world goes around me!
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- Long ago people believed that the universe went around the earth!
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- Of course after so many years of scientific observations and researches, we now know that the earth goes around the sun and they both turn around some other celestial object.
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- In a way we all believe that the universe and all other humans go around us, which technically means that each of us assumes that he/she is The Center Of This World.
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- ^__^ I just wonder what happens if someone proves that we are not the center.
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- Will we kill the one the same way our ancestors killed Galileo ? ^__^
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