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- happy
Hello!
- Merry christmas !
- Today is an important day,i finish my oral English exam ,I am so happy ,and,I want to make more friends in this club to improving my English ,in return ,I will help you to learn Chinese ,too.Thanks!

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- Today is an important day,i finish my oral English exam ,I am so happy ,and,I want to make more friends in this club to improving my English ,in return ,I will help you to learn Chinese ,too.Thanks!
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- Today is an important day,iI finish my oral English exam ,I am so happy ,and,I want to make more friends in this club to improving my English ,in return ,I will help you to learn Chinese ,too.Thanks!
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- Today is an important day,i; I finished my oral English exam ,and I am so happy. ~~,and,~~I want to make more friends in this club to improv~~ing~~e my English ,and in return ,I will help you to learn Chinese ~~,too~~.Thanks!
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