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  • I am Mikhail Atef, and I am 24 years old.
    • I live in the third district in ABC City, but I have raised in CBA City.
    • I graduated from Z university from faculty of Science, from department of Chemistry and Microbiology.
    • I have been working as an environmental specialist at the S. C.
    • Office from 1st of June 2024 until 1st of June 2025.
    • In the past, I attended lots of internships and college activities, also I am a certified internal auditor for the ISO 14001 EMS.
    • I attended a workshop of professional microbiology skills at Zewail City for Science and Technology, also I have successfully passed the training course of chemical tests of water and wastewater from Assiut and New valley company.

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    • I graduated from Z university from faculty of Science, from department of Chemistry and Microbiology.
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    • I graduated from Z university from, where I studied in the faculty of Science, from department of Chemistry and Microbiology.
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    • I graduated from Z uUniversity from faculty of Science, from d, the Department of Chemistry and Microbiology, Faculty of Science.
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    • In the past, I attended lots of internships and college activities, also I am a certified internal auditor for the ISO 14001 EMS.
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    • In the past, I attende've had lots of internships and college activities, a. Also, I am a certified internal auditor for theEnvironmental Management Systems under ISO 14001 EMS.
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    • In the past, I attended lots ofhave held many internships and and attended a lot of college activities, also. Furthermore, I am a certified internal auditor for the ISO 14001 EMS.
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    • I attended a workshop of professional microbiology skills at Zewail City for Science and Technology, also I have successfully passed the training course of chemical tests of water and wastewater from Assiut and New valley company.
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