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  • Free Like the Wind

  • The first day of summer for me became not just the day when you are changing your winter heavy boots to light summer tennis shoes like Ray Bradbury’s hero did.
    • Fortunately the weather allows to change it earlier, although time to time I still was forced to return to them, especially in the mornings while trips to the sea.
    • But today it’s finally finished with them - they are go to farthest corner of a closet.
  • Summer has started!
    • And the first day of it, like the last one, is something special, it’s like the symbol of better life or period in it.
  • It’s the start of the warmest, the greenest time in our life.
    • When you are living in a cold country it is really matters.
  • The days are going to be really pleasant, although is it possible they won’t be?
  • I adore these three months with especially long days - May, June and July.
  • Often I wake up with the sun and lay down after the sunset.
  • It’s incredibly enjoyable to meet and see off a day.
    • Only one golden reflection of the sun flickering on the water surface costs a lot...
    • Especially Japanese can to appreciate such beautiful moments.
    • They have two interesting words - one is describing the play of the sun – “Komorebi” and the other one is “Suigetsu” - the reflection of the moon in water surface.
    • Most of languages don’t have analogues to them.
    • Because nights are short now, there is too little time for sleep - just about 5 hours.
    • But I always can sleep during the day an hour or two.
    • I always promise it to myself, but until now seldom doing.
  • Anyway long days are the best time for me.
  • By the way, it’s the start of my freedom.
  • Finally I left my job!
  • I too tired of it, of doing something you don’t want and don’t like to do.
    • Now I’m going to be free like a wind.
  • I’m sure that the summer will be one of the best in my life!
  • I wish you always have enough time to enjoy this warm period and take from it as much as you can!

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