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  • Making My Own Life

    • I lead rather a solitary life.
    • Most of my time I live in my country house which is located not far from the Baltic Sea.
    • Forced but fortunately seldom journeys to the city is a torture for me.
    • No one except my boyfriend usually visit me, which has actually pleased me.
    • This almost only person in my life is more than rather a vulgar word ”boyfriend” I just will say that we’ve been together for 15 years - soul to soul.
    • He built this house - all alone with his own hands, the same as a year before he built a bathhouse.
    • In my side the main result is a well-kept garden, which recently got a landscape lighting and looks pretty even at night.
    • There is nothing unusual that I hate to leave this lovely place for long.
  • My main buddies here are birds.
    • Especially blackbirds, there are a lot of them here and they feel themselves here as in home not less than I do.
  • They are inspecting my garden beds with enviable regularity.
    • They loosen the garden beds with their beaks in a case to get food.
    • We have an unspoken agreement that they could eat all except earthworms, which is my helper in gardening.
    • Although I guess that time to time they break the agreement.
    • In August and September grown chicks of blackbirds are going crazy, they started to scatter everything around including moss between paths and of course my decoratively laid bark.
    • Their peaceful walks on my roof turns to a sprint and restless fights, during their plays they even crash into windows and in general go mad in all possible ways.
  • Actually, they behave exactly like teenagers.
    • Then they get over it and start leading a sedate life - their chirping no more so careless, they again back to inspecting my garden, after winter they are making families and hatching chicks, to have it all happen again.
  • Fortunately for me they don’t know that ”growing up” isn’t so necessary, but I know that and can enjoy the life I chose.

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    • This almost only person in my life is more than rather a vulgar word ”boyfriend” I just will say that we’ve been together for 15 years - soul to soul.
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    • This almost onlsolitary person in my life is much more than the rather a vulgar word ”boyfriend”. I just will say that we’ve been together for 15 years - soul to soul.
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    • He built this house - all alone with his own hands, the same as a year before he built a bathhouse.
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    • He built this house - all alone with his own hands, the sam - as was the case a year before when he built a bathhouse.
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    • In my side the main result is a well-kept garden, which recently got a landscape lighting and looks pretty even at night.
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    • InFrom my side the main result is a well-kept garden, which recently got a landscape lighting and looks pretty even at night.
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    • Especially blackbirds, there are a lot of them here and they feel themselves here as in home not less than I do.
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    • Especially blackbirds, t. There are a lot of them here and they feel themselves here as int home not less than I do.
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    • In August and September grown chicks of blackbirds are going crazy, they started to scatter everything around including moss between paths and of course my decoratively laid bark.
      투표하세요!
    • In August and September grown chicks of blackbird chicks are going crazy, t. They started to scatter everything around including moss between the paths and of course on my decoratively laid bark.
      50% GOOD (2 votes)
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    • Their peaceful walks on my roof turns to a sprint and restless fights, during their plays they even crash into windows and in general go mad in all possible ways.
      투표하세요!
    • Their peaceful walks on my roof turns to a sprint and restless fights, d. During their plays they even crash into windows and in general go mad in all possible ways.
      50% GOOD (2 votes)
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    • Then they get over it and start leading a sedate life - their chirping no more so careless, they again back to inspecting my garden, after winter they are making families and hatching chicks, to have it all happen again.
      투표하세요!
    • Then they get over it and start leading a sedate life - their chirping no more so careless, tly. They again go back to inspecting my garden and, after winter they are making families and hatching chicks, to have it all happen all over again.
      50% GOOD (2 votes)
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    • Fortunately for me they don’t know that ”growing up” isn’t so necessary, but I know that and can enjoy the life I chose.
      투표하세요!
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