添削

A Game

• I played a game lots of time when I was a kid.

• I don't know how to name it, but i believe you will know when I describe it.

• Pratically, people play this game using many pieces of dominos.

• However, in my childhood, I had got no pieces of them.Luckly, because every new semester, my brother and I would gain about 14 taps, chinese and english textbooks' recording.

• They seemed no use to our study, but fun game.

• My brother and I stood the tapes in line, insuring the forer one would fall on the latter one.

• Each time it took us about 10 to 15 minutes to arrange them in different shapes, such as star, apple and even some simple chinese charictor.

• Then we would trigger one of them, creating a chain reation.

• I think it might much more exciting than the tradditional dominos,because they could creat a louder sound when they lay down one by one.

• As this game requires patience, edurance and concentration, while all the effort will be rewardable, listening to the "papapapa".It is a little bit like our living.

• I really miss those simple pleases of my childhood.