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55elena_jvからのテキスト - English

  • “It is time, Beauty, Wake up…”

    • Comes that time when you do not need an alarm anymore.
    • Its role now took to themselves birds with their morning trills and the sun which rises early enough.
    • All those ”restless” wish you also feel spring and awake with the nature and with its strength too.
    • Oh, how strong and full of life this time all around.
    • With an incredible persistence a new life blazes its trail.
  • Do you know why birds are singing at all?
    • Actually, there is lots of reason, although there are two the main.
  • The first is to attract a partner.
    • ”Feathered lady” chooses a partner for its bright outfit and for a sonorous beautiful song.
    • The second one is a protection of territory.
  • By its singing birds are notifying that a nesting area is engaged and is under protection.
    • The bird song is especially strong in spring, exactly when they are making pairs and hatch chicks.
    • Usually male is who are singing, ”Ladies” join rarely.
    • Now we have the height of spring with beautiful warm weather.
  • So, the singing in all keys is heard everywhere.
    • In my countryside area there are a lot of different birds.
    • Although the most seen are a blackbird, a redstart, a robin, a magpie, a wood pigeon, a tit and a blue tit.
  • And of course, a handsome woodpecker, which started knocking on a concrete pole since the beginning of March.
    • It seems that his improvisations on a concrete pole made the result, and he found his ”Feathered lady”.
    • Al least now his play on the pole almost finished.
  • Apparently, other cares have come up.
  • I wish you a nice warm spring full of its fresh smells and melodic sounds!

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English