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  • Incomprehensible

    • Even if I know normality doesn't exist, I'm still surprising about man's behavior.
    • When someone can slightly admit that needs a pleasure, and you gently accept to, making save the word HELP.
    • Obviously, for asking helping is necessary to be SELF-ASSURED, and no many people has this quality.
    • But, when you listen these words, you could be shocked: "You could have called this morning to know IF I NEEDED STILL..." These words definitely shocked me.
    • Put me in a identity crisis, I asked myself if I was a seller and when it happened :D Fortunately I overcame my existential problem in one second, thinking that that man needed a good doctor!
    • :) But, I'm guessing still if this behavior is the inheritance of colonization "the man white doesn't need you!" :D Or if simply, that man has no other resources to meet a girl, when he understands that his flirting didn't work!
    • To resolve this, I need a doctor, too!!!

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    • When someone can slightly admit that needs a pleasure, and you gently accept to, making save the word HELP.
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    • When someone can slightly admit that needs a pleasure, and you gently accept to, making save the word HELPadmits his need for help, it doesn't take long before another comes to his aid.
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    • But, when you listen these words, you could be shocked: "You could have called this morning to know IF I NEEDED STILL..." These words definitely shocked me.
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    • But, when you listen these words, you could be shockmight be surprised: "You could have called me this morning to know IF I NEEDED STILLif I still needed it..." ¶These words definitely shocked me.
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    • Put me in a identity crisis, I asked myself if I was a seller and when it happened :D Fortunately I overcame my existential problem in one second, thinking that that man needed a good doctor!
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    • Put meHaving been in an identity crisis, I asked myself if I was a seller and when it happened :D Fortunately I overcame my existentialing problem in one second, thinkmmediately, realizing that thate man needed a good doctor!
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    • :) But, I'm guessing still if this behavior is the inheritance of colonization "the man white doesn't need you!" :D Or if simply, that man has no other resources to meet a girl, when he understands that his flirting didn't work!
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    • :) But, I'm guessing stillI'm still wondering if this behavior is the inheritancea product of colonization " the man white man doesn't need you!" :D Or ift could simply, be that a man has no other resourcedoesn't have other ways to meetcoax a girl, when he understands that if his flirting didoesn't work!
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