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  • Excessive Comfort

    • The civilization spoiled us mercilessly.
    • We got used to all this comforts.
    • So already we can’t imagine our life without such ”simple” things as a refrigerator or a washing machine or even a microwave.
    • In my country house I used to live without all those things quite happily.
    • Although after it was rebuilt I decided that it’s time to make my life a bit more comfortable.
  • So the first one was a refrigerator.
  • Now it just came into my house and I’m not sure if I’m happy with my new resident.
    • It takes place, it makes some noise, it consumes electricity, although it is a small and quite quiet one, but after a long time without it, it’s eye-catching.
  • Well, was it really so bad without a refrigerator?
    • Actually not so, in winter those few products which need cold are living outside.
    • Not a big deal that once an unknown animal dragged away and tore to pieces my packet of milk (yes, in Russia milk usually not in boxes, but in thick polyethylene packets - polypack) .
    • And in summer milk often turns sour and goes into pancakes...For a modern average person all these could seems a heathenism, although I’m not finding there anything special, at least it peace, quiet and space and you pay less for electricity.
    • Anyway now I got those new lodger and I even think we’ll get along.
    • Although I still against over comfort things.
    • At least to warm up my food I still able in a frying pan...
    • I wish you comfort but simple life in a harmony with yourself.

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