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Poruka od Apres-midi - English

  • A woman with blue skin

    • It was late evening when Annie was walking down the street in the city center.
    • A girl turned left on the corner.
    • She was upset because she had a fight with her mum.
    • This woman will never accept the fact that Annie wants to see the world, explore every nook and cranny of it.
  • Annie was very ambitious.
  • She craved freedom and separation because she thought that she’s ready for her own life and mistakes.
    • There were numerous and continuous discords on this recurring theme in her family.
  • This time wasn’t an exception.
    • She was wandering between different buildings; her head was pounding because of endless tears.
  • When her sadness became less heart wrenching and intense, she heard a noise.
  • She realised that someone was following her.
  • When she turned her head, she saw a woman.
  • She was dressed in white tissue, which was transparent and reflected her blue skin.
    • She had no hair but was beautiful with big eyes with two pupils.
    • It was groundbreaking and shocking experience.
    • Annie couldn’t believe her eyes as she has never seen a creature like this before.
    • She didn’t know what to do, she couldn’t found out where she was.
    • Then woman looked her in the eyes and Annie understood that she didn’t mean to be here.
  • It became obvious that she wasn’t on Earth anymore.

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