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  • Driven by the Wind

    • How beautiful actually a sea storm is - high waves, splashes of water, white sea foam all frolics and rages furiously.
    • Seagulls forced to forget their own deals and are flying rather for winds matters.
    • Me actually too changed my plans influenced by the wind - so fast it pushes me forward, that I skiped the necessary turn and rushed straight ahead driven by the wind.
    • It gave me a great cycling, almost without efforts with beautiful views and the shining sun.
    • Though it was so pleasant and easy just until then we was on the same way with the wind, just as I rounded backwards all came back to me a hundredfold...
    • Fortunately, the storm didn’t attract much people, so my morning walk also passed alone with the elements.
    • I had my fill of practicing walking backwards as it is the best way to go against the wind and not to be fead by the sand.
    • Predatory raids of waves on the shore reminded me as in the summer such waves dragged away all my belongings while I was swimming.
    • Now it’s even funny to remember how surprised I was when saw my flip flops floating like little ships instead to wait me calmly on the shore.
    • I already were imagining how I will go home just in my swimsuit along the road, when the sea though took pity and allowed me to fished out some of my things..
    • Apparently that the lesson wasn’t in wain, part of my belongings forever were taken by the sea.
    • Now I always remember that how the element wasn’t beautiful it’s can be dangerous and damaging and look at it with respectful admiration.

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  • 문장 1
    • How beautiful actually a sea storm is - high waves, splashes of water, white sea foam all frolics and rages furiously.
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    • How beautiful actually a sea storm is - high waves, and splashes of water, as the white sea foam all frolics and rages furiously.
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  • 문장 3
    • Me actually too changed my plans influenced by the wind - so fast it pushes me forward, that I skiped the necessary turn and rushed straight ahead driven by the wind.
      투표하세요!
    • Me actually too changed my plans influency plans are too directed by the wind - so fast it pushes me so fast forward, that I skipped the necessary turn and rushed straight ahead driven by the wind.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • Though it was so pleasant and easy just until then we was on the same way with the wind, just as I rounded backwards all came back to me a hundredfold...
      투표하세요!
    • Though it was so pleasant and easy just until then we was owhile we were still in the same waydirection with the wind, then just as I rounded backwards allturned around it came back ato me a hundredfold...
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • Fortunately, the storm didn’t attract much people, so my morning walk also passed alone with the elements.
      투표하세요!
    • Fortunately, the storm didn’t attract muchany people, so my morning walk also passed alone with the elements.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
  • 문장 7
    • I had my fill of practicing walking backwards as it is the best way to go against the wind and not to be fead by the sand.
      투표하세요!
    • I had my fill of practicing walking backwards as it is the best way to go against the wind and not to be fhead by theed into by the flying sand.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
  • 문장 8
    • Predatory raids of waves on the shore reminded me as in the summer such waves dragged away all my belongings while I was swimming.
      투표하세요!
    • Predatory raids of waves onhitting the shore reminded me as inof the summer when such waves dragged away all my belongings while I was swimming.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
  • 문장 9
    • Now it’s even funny to remember how surprised I was when saw my flip flops floating like little ships instead to wait me calmly on the shore.
      투표하세요!
    • Now it’s even funny to remember how surprised I was when saw my flip flops were floating like little ships instead tof waiting for me calmly on the shore.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
  • 문장 10
    • I already were imagining how I will go home just in my swimsuit along the road, when the sea though took pity and allowed me to fished out some of my things..
      투표하세요!
    • I already were imagining how I willmight go home just in my swimsuit along the road, when the sea though took pity and allowed me to fished out some of my things..
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10
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  • 문장 12
    • Now I always remember that how the element wasn’t beautiful it’s can be dangerous and damaging and look at it with respectful admiration.
      투표하세요!
    • Now I always remember that how the element wasn’ts aren't always so beautiful it’s. They can be dangerous and damaging and. I look at ithem with respectful admiration.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 12