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    • A Lion Award

    • Last week I went to movies.
  • I needed to be on my own because I needed to be among people.
    • Only when your are completely free you can give your attention to everything.
    • And so, unexpectedly you become an archeologist and, sometimes, unfortunately, you become a paleontologist... when you realize people lives dying :) Well, I found very funny, no, not the film.
    • I found very funny the mediocrity of the advertising on a van that sold bottles of water.
    • No words, just an image: A couple of sensual lips intenting to drink the water from the bottle.
    • I thought I had a problem, if genious of advertising find still suggestive for people this kind of things, probably I overestimate human race! :)

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