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  • Too Much of a Noise

  • Do you like music?
    • I’m not much, I’m rather a fond of silence.
    • I have nothing against nature sounds such as birds singing, the sound of the sea and rain, rustling leaves and chirping insects - all these is good accompanied to a silence, I enjoy it a lot.
    • But music , it often breaks this harmony.
    • Especially I hate people who turns on music that everyone around also heard it.
  • It is really annoying, but such people never care about it.
    • The times when people dragged tape recorders on the shoulder​ passed, the era of headphones have already come, but again they don’t care.​ Some people fill every possible minute with any sound - music, audio books, radio, TV and so on. Why?
    • Are they so afraid to stay alone with their own thoughts?
  • I can’t understand that.
  • Just I can’t understand why it always should be a ”noise”.
    • I also hear audio books and music, even go to a music concert sometimes.
  • But mostly I don’t need it.
    • The nature sound and my thoughts usually enough for me , to fill my time and make me happy.
  • Unfortunately in my world it’s difficult to catch a sip of life-giving silence.
    • People who are already getting too much of noise, are finding absolutely necessary to add much more - they turn on music too loud, their dogs and children are constantly barking and crying, they are too much talking by the phone, and nevertheless if they get a minute of silence they aren’t able to enjoy it, they rush to turn on one of the noise sources..
    • I wish you, that your reality wasn’t needed to be muffled , stay health and happy.

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    • I have nothing against nature sounds such as birds singing, the sound of the sea and rain, rustling leaves and chirping insects - all these is good accompanied to a silence, I enjoy it a lot.
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    • I have nothing against naturthe sounds of nature such as birds singing, the sound of the sea and rain, rustling leaves and chirping insects - all these isare a good accompaniedment to a silence, which I enjoy it a lot.
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    • The times when people dragged tape recorders on the shoulder​ passed, the era of headphones have already come, but again they don’t care.​ Some people fill every possible minute with any sound - music, audio books, radio, TV and so on. Why?
      투표하세요!
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       dragged tape recorders on their shoulders​ has already passed, the era of headphones haves already come, but again they don’t care.​ Some people addictively fill every possible minute with any sound - music, audio books, radio, TV and so on. Why?
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    • People who are already getting too much of noise, are finding absolutely necessary to add much more - they turn on music too loud, their dogs and children are constantly barking and crying, they are too much talking by the phone, and nevertheless if they get a minute of silence they aren’t able to enjoy it, they rush to turn on one of the noise sources..
      투표하세요!
    • People, who are already getting too much of noise, are finding it absolutely necessary to add much more - they turn onup their music too loudly, their dogs and children are constantly barking and crying, and they are too much talking byon the phone, and n too much. Nevertheless, even if they get a minute of silence they aren’t able to enjoy it, t. They rush to turn on one of the noise sources..
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