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My hobbies
- Manies occupy particular place in man's life.
- Hobby a special interest that people do in their free time.
- In free time I prefer reading books.
Now I read "I have the honor", a historical roman by Valentin Pikul.
- Also I do sports.
- Every day I ride in bicycle.
- In the morning I run in the street around my home.
- My hobbies is painting and drawing.
- In this year I will enter in art school.
- For me painting is a means to understand the beaty and harmonyof the surrounding world, a way to express my own emotions, feeling and perceptions of life.

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- Manies occupy particular place in man's life.
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- Hobby a special interest that people do in their free time.
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- In free time I prefer reading books.
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- Now I read "I have the honor", a historical roman by Valentin Pikul.
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- Also I do sports.
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- Every day I ride in bicycle.
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- In the morning I run in the street around my home.
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- My hobbies is painting and drawing.
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- In this year I will enter in art school.
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- For me painting is a means to understand the beaty and harmonyof the surrounding world, a way to express my own emotions, feeling and perceptions of life.
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- For me painting is a means to understand the beaty and harmonyof the surrounding world, a way to express my own emotions, feeling and perceptions of life. ¶¶"For me painting is a way to/of understand/-ing the beauty and harmony of the surrounding world, a way to express my own emotions, feeling and perceptions of/about life. ¶¶Painting means to me understanding the beauty and harmony of the surrounding world..."
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