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- How can i keep my friendship?
- I have a close friend. she and i like sister, we always share everything eachother,. but now after she get married, she change alots. i feel that now our friendship nearly broke. what should i do ?

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- How can i keep my friendship?
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- I have a close friend. she and i like sister, we always share everything eachother,. but now after she get married, she change alots. i feel that now our friendship nearly broke. what should i do ?
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- I have/had a close friend. sShe and iI were like sister,s: we always shared everything ~~eachother,~~. bBut now, after she get married, she has changed a lots. iI feel that now, our friendship is nearly broken. what should iI do ?
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- I have a close friend. ~~she and i~~We were like sister~~, we always~~s. We used to share everything to each other,. bBut ~~now~~ after she geot married, she has changed a lots. iI feel ~~that now~~like our friendship is nearly ~~broke~~over. wWhat should iI do ?
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