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    • A butcher’s adventure

    • There was an old and famous story in Chinese that happened between a butcher and two wolves.One night, a butcher went home.There was only a few bones in his carrying pole.There were two wolves stalking him.They followed the butcher for a long time.
    • The butcher was terrified, he threw some bones to one of the two wolves, the wolf which got the bones stopped, but the other still stalking.Then the butcher threw the remaining bones to the wolf which was stalking him, it stopped.But the first wolf kept going stalking him.There was nothing in the butcher’s carrying pole, but the two wolves went on stalking the butcher again.
    • The butcher was embarrassed.He feared that he would be attacked on his belly and back.Luckily, he saw a haystack on the farm.He quickly ran to it, put down his carrying pole and take out the butcher knife.The wolves were afraid of going near him.They stayed far from the butcher.
    • Later, one wolf went away.The other sat on the lawn and slept comfortably.The butcher thought it was strange.He suddenly jumped up and killed the wolf.He was just about to leave, but he suddenly saw a wolf making a hole in the haystack.He quickly killed the wolf and just realize that the wolf which sat on the lawn pretended to sleep to attract the mind of him and the other wolf would attack his back.The wolves were really cunning.

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  • Mondat 1
    • There was an old and famous story in Chinese that happened between a butcher and two wolves.One night, a butcher went home.There was only a few bones in his carrying pole.There were two wolves stalking him.They followed the butcher for a long time.
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    • There was an old and famous story in Chinese that happened between a butcher and two wolves.One ¶
      night, a butcher went home.There w      asere only a few bones in his carrying pole.There were two wolves stalking him.They followed the butcher for a long time.
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    • There was an old and famous story written in Chinese that happened between a butcher and two wolves. One ¶
      night,       a butcher went home.There was, with only a few bones in his carrying pole. There were two wolves stalking him.They, followeding the butcher for a long time.
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    • The butcher was terrified, he threw some bones to one of the two wolves, the wolf which got the bones stopped, but the other still stalking.Then the butcher threw the remaining bones to the wolf which was stalking him, it stopped.But the first wolf kept going stalking him.There was nothing in the butcher’s carrying pole, but the two wolves went on stalking the butcher again.
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    • The butcher was terrified, he threw some bones to one of the two wolves, the wolf which got the bones stopped, but the other was still stalking.Then the butcher threw the remaining bones to the wolf which was stalking him, it stopped.But the first wolf kept goingon stalking him.There was nothing in the butcher’s carrying pole, butso the two wolves went on stalking the butcher again.
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    • The butcher was terrified, so he threw some bones to one of the two wolves, the wolf which got the bones. That wolf stopped, but the other was still stalkfollowing. Then the butcher threw the remaining bones to the wolf whicho was stalking him, and it stopped.But Unfortunately, the first wolf kept going stalkhad moved on and was back to following him.There was nothing in the butcher’s carrying pole, but the twoso both wolves went back on stalking the butcher again.
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  • Mondat 3
    • The butcher was embarrassed.He feared that he would be attacked on his belly and back.Luckily, he saw a haystack on the farm.He quickly ran to it, put down his carrying pole and take out the butcher knife.The wolves were afraid of going near him.They stayed far from the butcher.
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    • The butcher was embarrassed.He feared that he would be attacked on his belly and back.Luckily, he saw a haystack on thea farm.He quickly ran to it, put down his carrying pole and take out the butcher knife.The wolves were afraid of going near him.They stayed far from the butcher.
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    • The butcher was embarrassterrified.He feared that he would be attacked on his belly and back.at this rate. Luckily, he saw a haystack on the farm. He quickly ran to it, put down his carrying pole and take out the butcher knife.The wolves were afraid of going near him.They stayed far from, seeing the weapon.They warily watched the butcher from afar.
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  • Mondat 4
    • Later, one wolf went away.The other sat on the lawn and slept comfortably.The butcher thought it was strange.He suddenly jumped up and killed the wolf.He was just about to leave, but he suddenly saw a wolf making a hole in the haystack.He quickly killed the wolf and just realize that the wolf which sat on the lawn pretended to sleep to attract the mind of him and the other wolf would attack his back.The wolves were really cunning.
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    • Later, one wolf went away.The other sat on the lawn and slept comfortably.The butcher thought it was strange.He suddenly jumped up and killed the wolf.He was just about to leave, but he suddenly saw a wolf making a hole in the haystack.He quickly killed the wolf and jusbut realized that the wolf which sat on the lawn had only pretended to sleep to attract the mind of him anddraw his attention so the other wolf wcould attack his back.The wolves were really cunning.
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    • Later, one wolf went away.The other sat on the lawn and slept comfortably.The butcher thought it was strange. He suddenly jumped up and killed the wolf.He was just about to leave, but he suddenly saw athe other wolf making a hole in the haystack. He quickly killed the wolf and just realize that the wolf which sat on the lawn pretended to sleep to attract the mind of himhis attention and the other wolf would attack his back.The wolves were really cunning.
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