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    • The dog in memery

    • I had a dog when I was 25 year old, the dog provided the special memery to me.
    • It is the first time to feed and care a dog, so I take a mess for many thing, such as cleaning dog shit, training the actives of dog.
    • The name of dog is Poal, it have yellow appearance, short ears, middle size body. for the special event, Poal run away from the home in a morning.
    • It open the door by itself, and play in outdoor, and lose the way to back home.
    • I feel stress and sad when I lose Poal.
    • Luckly, Poal find the way to come back home next day morning.

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    • It is the first time to feed and care a dog, so I take a mess for many thing, such as cleaning dog shit, training the actives of dog.
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    • It is the first time to feed my dog and to care for a dog, so I take a mess for many thingwill give up time for dogs, such as cleaning dog shit, training the actives of dogs.
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    • It ishad been the first time toI had feed and taken care of a dog, so I take a mess for many thing, such as cleaning dog shit, training the actives of dohad to do many things for the first time, such as cleaning up afterwards and training.
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    • The name of dog is Poal, it have yellow appearance, short ears, middle size body. for the special event, Poal run away from the home in a morning.
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    • The name of my dog is Poal, it haves a yellow appearance, short ears, middleedium size body. for the special event, PoalPoal would run away from the home in asometimes in the morning.
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    • The name of my dog is Poal, it have. He/she has a yellow appearance, short ears, middle size body. for the special event, PoalOccasionally, Poal would run away from the home in athe morning.
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    • It open the door by itself, and play in outdoor, and lose the way to back home.
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    • ItThe dog would open the door by ithimself, and play in outdoor,outside, and get lost and loose thehis way to back home.
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    • ItHe/she would open the door by ithimself/herself, and play in outdoor, and lose the way tos then become lost trying to get back home.
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