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  • Television

    • Televisions receive data and turn it into images and sounds.
  • People watch and listen.
    • John Baird created the first TV in 1925: it only had one colour and 30 lines.
  • The first TV station rose in New York in 1928.
  • Few people had TV sets and the first broadcasts were mere experiments.
    • Around the late 30s, the situation improved: TVs were working well, many were used during the World Fair and even the US president delivered a speech on TV.
  • After the Second World War, television sets became more and more popular.
  • TV networks began to increase in number and their shows were aired at a fixed time nearly every day.
  • In 1953 colour TVs came out, and in the 60s they became cheaper.
    • Nowadays TVs are high-def, their image is clear and have a huge number of lines.
    • 3D TVs are more and more common.
  • What will the next step be?
    • Question: should date be considered singular or plural?

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