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  • The Baltic Sea

  • I adore our sea.
    • It is so different each times - quiet, calm, agitated or raging.
    • And which beautiful sunsets it gives us!
    • It is not so effete as southern seas, with Nordic character, but not too harsh.
    • It is like strong and taut young man.
    • And it is in fact quite young, it formed about 4 thousand years ago.
    • The Baltic sea is one of the least salty seas - in 15 times less salty then any average sea.
    • An ebb and flow almost aren’t known to us, actually they are, but they give water level fluctuation not more then 20-30 sm.
    • On the other hand, storms and winds change a coastline completely - wash away sand, exposing boulders, water goes back or vice versa eats the beaches.
  • I can sit by the sea for hours and it is never enough or boring.
  • It seems that some years ago people didn’t know that there is a sea here.
    • Even local were grinning about it, meaning that the sea is cold and windy and nothing special at all.
    • But at one moment the sea becomes popular, it is a trend now.
  • Everyone finds it necessary to visit it almost every weekend.
    • People started to visit it regularly not just in hot summer days, but in any suitable (and not too) case - in the off-season and in winter, on warm days or in storms to enjoy its Nordic character.
  • In evenings the seashore looks like a cinema.
    • People are sitting down in stumps (from sawn trees that were blown down by the wind) face to the sea and one moment the action begins...I’m not happy about its unexpected popularity, it was much better when there were just a few people, but not those crowds who even can’t really feel the sea, for most it’s just nice photos and tribute to fashion and nothing more.

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    • An ebb and flow almost aren’t known to us, actually they are, but they give water level fluctuation not more then 20-30 sm.
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    • AnIts ebb and flow are almost aren’t unknown to us, a. Actually they are, but they give a water -level fluctuation of not more then 20-30 scm.
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    • On the other hand, storms and winds change a coastline completely - wash away sand, exposing boulders, water goes back or vice versa eats the beaches.
      투표하세요!
    • On the other hand, storms and winds change a coastline completely - washing away sand, or exposing boulders, w. Water goes back or vice versa eand forth, eating away ats the beaches.
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    • People started to visit it regularly not just in hot summer days, but in any suitable (and not too) case - in the off-season and in winter, on warm days or in storms to enjoy its Nordic character.
      투표하세요!
    • People started to visit it regularly not just in hot summer days, but in any suitable (and not toso) case - in the off-season and in winter, on warm days or during storms to enjoy its Nordic character.
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    • People are sitting down in stumps (from sawn trees that were blown down by the wind) face to the sea and one moment the action begins...I’m not happy about its unexpected popularity, it was much better when there were just a few people, but not those crowds who even can’t really feel the sea, for most it’s just nice photos and tribute to fashion and nothing more.
      투표하세요!
    • People are sitting down ion stumps (from sawn-off trees that were blown down by the wind) faceing to the sea and at one moment the action begins...I’m not happy about its unexpected popularity, i. It was much better when there were just a few people, but not thosesuch crowds who even can’t even really feel the sea, f. For most it’s just nice photos and a tribute to fashion and n. Nothing more.
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