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  • Somewhere Far From People...

    • I’d like to live in a forest, near a sea shore or in mountains, somewhere far from people, that for a long distance there were only silence and nature.
    • But people now everywhere, there are too much of them.
    • It was needed 10.000 years that population of the planet increases from 5 million to 1 billion, 125 years to double it to 2 billion and only 50 years to double it again to 4 billion.
    • Now population of the planet is more than 8 billion people, it have been increasing about 2% per year, 82 million new people arrived each years.
    • And some countries are still focus on demographics increase...
    • I really want to live somewhere far from all this madness, all those people, which are everywhere now.
  • But it is not easy actually to run away from it.
    • Civilization and system firmly keep us.
    • They taught us to all those comforts, so you can’t just off in a forest.
    • I still want to be a civilized person and used its benefits, just away from civilization itself.
  • This is already complicated.
  • In Russia we have programs called ”Far Eastern hectare” and ”Hectare in the Arctic”.
    • Within this program is possible to get 1 hectare of land for free on a particulare territories of Far East and in the Arctic zone.
    • A plot of land could be near a sea or volcano, in a populated area or in a forest.
    • Sounds nice, aren’t it?
    • But even there lots of nuances.
    • Such as for example, those lands aren’t so good for life as you would like, there are too cold and completely wild, to make there at least a part of civilisation would be very difficult and expensive, by the way you still need to taxes for this land...
    • So while my dream remains just a dream, my friend and I are building a house in a small piece of land - 20 times less than a hectare, to try find there a peace and quiet in the middle of civilisation though.

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    • I’d like to live in a forest, near a sea shore or in mountains, somewhere far from people, that for a long distance there were only silence and nature.
      투표하세요!
    • I’d like to live in a forest, near a sea shore or in the mountains, somewhere far from people, that for a long distance there wereis only silence and nature.
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    • It was needed 10.000 years that population of the planet increases from 5 million to 1 billion, 125 years to double it to 2 billion and only 50 years to double it again to 4 billion.
      투표하세요!
    • It was neededtook 10.000 years that for the population of the planet to increases from 5 million to 1 billion, 125 years to double it to 2 billion and only 50 years to double it yet again to 4 billion.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • Now population of the planet is more than 8 billion people, it have been increasing about 2% per year, 82 million new people arrived each years.
      투표하세요!
    • Now the population of the planet is more than 8 billion people, i. It have been increasing about 2% per year, with 82 million new people arrivbeing added each years.
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    • I really want to live somewhere far from all this madness, all those people, which are everywhere now.
      투표하세요!
    • I really want to live somewhere far from all this madness, away from all those people, whicho are everywhere now.
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    • Within this program is possible to get 1 hectare of land for free on a particulare territories of Far East and in the Arctic zone.
      투표하세요!
    • Within this program is possible to get 1 hectare of land for free on ain particulare territories of the Far East and in the Arctic zone.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13
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    • Such as for example, those lands aren’t so good for life as you would like, there are too cold and completely wild, to make there at least a part of civilisation would be very difficult and expensive, by the way you still need to taxes for this land...
      투표하세요!
    • Such as, for example, those lands aren’t so good for life as you would like, there. They are too cold and completely wild, to make therem at least a part of civilisation. This would be very difficult and expensive, b. By the way, you still need pay to taxes and other charges for this land...
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • So while my dream remains just a dream, my friend and I are building a house in a small piece of land - 20 times less than a hectare, to try find there a peace and quiet in the middle of civilisation though.
      투표하세요!
    • So while my dream remains just a dream, my friend and I are building a house ion a small piece of land - 20 times less than a hectare, - to try find there a peace and quiet in the middle of civilisation though.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 18