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  • A Person of Nature

  • I’m not an urban person at all.
    • As longer I live outside the city walls, then less I want to return there.
  • I hate its polluted air, noisiness and crowds.
    • The nature is much more close for me - the sound of the sea and the wind.
    • Even the shrill cry of seagulls isn’t a noise, whereas the barking of dogs is a noise, really annoying one actually.
    • I like be one to one with a silence and I hate all what disturb it, all what isn’t suit a place.
    • I’ve been spending about 18 hours in an open air - I work and read in an open terrace near my house, grow some fruits and vegetables in my garden, eating and drinking tea in a gazebo, cycling to the sea for swimming in mornings and for sunsets in evenings.
    • Just for sleeping I go into the house, just 6 hours out of 24 I’m in 4 walls.
    • Recently I with surprise understood that my legs doesn’t know other boot as rubber slippers and sandals for a couple of months.
    • The summer is magic time in such places as mine, as we have the really good weather just about 5 month in a year, so I we are value it very much and try to get every peace of it.
    • Usually I live here on the nature just in a warm time, but now I feel that I don’t want to return in the city even for winter.
    • Although the most grey time of the year is grey and boring even here.
    • So I would like to spending this time in travel, to change conditions and avoid our disgusting winter.
    • Anyway I still have some time not to remember of boots and cities, get deeper into my rubber slippers instead and enjoy summer.

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    • Even the shrill cry of seagulls isn’t a noise, whereas the barking of dogs is a noise, really annoying one actually.
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    • Even the shrilling cry of seagulls isn’t a noise, whereas the barking of dogs is a noise, a really annoying one actually.
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    • I’ve been spending about 18 hours in an open air - I work and read in an open terrace near my house, grow some fruits and vegetables in my garden, eating and drinking tea in a gazebo, cycling to the sea for swimming in mornings and for sunsets in evenings.
      투표하세요!
    • I’ve been spending about 18 hours in an open air - I work and read ion an open terrace near my house, grow some fruits and vegetables in my garden, eating and drinking tea in a gazebo, cycling to the sea for swimming in the mornings and for sunsets in evenings.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • Recently I with surprise understood that my legs doesn’t know other boot as rubber slippers and sandals for a couple of months.
      투표하세요!
    • Recently I understood with some surprise understood that my legs doesn’t knowhaven’t been experiencing other bfoot aswear apart from rubber slippers and sandals for a couple of months.
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    • The summer is magic time in such places as mine, as we have the really good weather just about 5 month in a year, so I we are value it very much and try to get every peace of it.
      투표하세요!
    • The summer is a magic time in such places as mine, as we have the really good weather justonly for about 5 month in a year, so I we arwe value it very much and try to get every peaceart of it.
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    • Usually I live here on the nature just in a warm time, but now I feel that I don’t want to return in the city even for winter.
      투표하세요!
    • Usually I live here on thein nature just in athe warm timeperiod, but now I feel that I don’t want to return into the city even for winter.
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    • So I would like to spending this time in travel, to change conditions and avoid our disgusting winter.
      투표하세요!
    • So I would like to spending this time in travel, to change conditionsing, changing my environment and avoiding our disgusting winter.
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    • Anyway I still have some time not to remember of boots and cities, get deeper into my rubber slippers instead and enjoy summer.
      투표하세요!
    • Anyway I still have some time not to rememberthink of boots and cities, get deeper into my rubber slippers instead and enjoy the summer.
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