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A day in the countryside

• I live in Provence, a small village in the countryside.

• I love my region, the sky is blue and the birds sing day and night.

• Today, the sun is too warm and I am sitting in my sofa and speaking with you.

• In the morning, I went outside to pick up fruits on the trees and cut dead branches and too high grass.

• In the end of the afternoon, I will go to the river to refresh myself.

• The water is always on move and so cold.

• I will feel myself so good after this bath!