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  • The Morning Activity

    • Almost each morning I start with cycle to the sea where I’m swimming and doing some exercises.
  • I like this kind of my activity very much.
    • Sometimes the weather and the nature especially contribute to this activity as it was today for example.
  • It’s not just about the clear blue sky and the warm sun.
    • Rather I prefer when there are some clouds, altostratus and cirrus even cumulus clouds, they are drawing on the sky something incredible, are painted in hundreds of shades passing through the morning sun rays and how many shapes and volume.
    • When I were swimming to direction of boardwalk pier the sun made its way and lit lanterns, in deep blue sky lanterns which were turn on by the sun looked amazing.
    • And in general all around were highlighted by already doomed sun, all were so colorful and clearly defined.
    • In such moments you don’t know where to look as all around is perfect, you want to catch it all, to absorb it and fix inside you.
    • It was certainly that the morning and the sun living out their last minutes, obviously that soon we would be covered by rain.
    • But fortunately it didn’t hurry to much.
    • After I have come out of the water the sky were dark blue on three quarters and it was more prudent to leave immediately.
    • But prudence is not for me, I’d done my usual exercise enjoying by unfolding action.
    • And actually I was reward - I’ve finished my exercise without catching even a drop from the sky and just had got some when I was approaching to my bicycle.
    • The forest, through which I went afterwards covered me for some more minutes and then, then I was ready to catch much more drops.
    • Anyway my shorts are already wet from the swimming, so what is so bad if my t-shirt and cap also will be wet.
    • The main is that the morning was perfect and at home I will dress in dry and the hot tea will be especially good.

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    • Rather I prefer when there are some clouds, altostratus and cirrus even cumulus clouds, they are drawing on the sky something incredible, are painted in hundreds of shades passing through the morning sun rays and how many shapes and volume.
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    • Rather I prefer when there are some clouds, altostratus and, cirrus and even cumulus clouds, t. They are drawing onthemselves over the sky something incredible, are painted in hundreds of shades passing through the morning sun rays and howwith ever so many shapes and volumes.
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    • When I were swimming to direction of boardwalk pier the sun made its way and lit lanterns, in deep blue sky lanterns which were turn on by the sun looked amazing.
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    • When I wereas swimming toin the direction of the boardwalk pier, the sun made its way forward and lit lanterns, in deep blue sky lanterns which were turn on by the sunthe clouds. In the deep blue sky these lanterns looked truly amazing.
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    • And in general all around were highlighted by already doomed sun, all were so colorful and clearly defined.
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    • And in gGenerally all around wereme was highlighted by an already doomed sun, all were. Everything was so colorful and clearly defined.
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    • In such moments you don’t know where to look as all around is perfect, you want to catch it all, to absorb it and fix inside you.
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    • InDuring such moments you don’t know where to look as all around is perfect, y. You want to catch it all, to absorb it andthen fix it inside you.
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    • It was certainly that the morning and the sun living out their last minutes, obviously that soon we would be covered by rain.
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    • It was certainly that the morning and the sun were living out their last minutes, obviously that soon we would obviously be covered by rain.
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    • After I have come out of the water the sky were dark blue on three quarters and it was more prudent to leave immediately.
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    • After I haved come out of the water the sky were dark blue on three quartersbecame a nightish dark blue and it was more prudent to leave immediately.
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    • And actually I was reward - I’ve finished my exercise without catching even a drop from the sky and just had got some when I was approaching to my bicycle.
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    • And actually I was reward - I’ve finished my exercise without catching even a drop from the sky and just had got someonly just caught a few droplets when I was approaching to my bicycle.
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    • The forest, through which I went afterwards covered me for some more minutes and then, then I was ready to catch much more drops.
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    • The forest, through which I went afterwards, covered me for some more minutes and then, then, I was ready to catch muchany more drops.
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    • The main is that the morning was perfect and at home I will dress in dry and the hot tea will be especially good.
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    • The maost important thing is that the morning whas been perfect and at home I willould dress in dry andcloths with the hot tea will bebeing especially good.
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