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Rédigé par Mialee - English

  • A Photo I Like

    • There is a photo I quite like which was taken at my age of 3.
    • In that time we still use flim camera, after my father visited Hk, there were some flim which have not been uesd.
    • So he asked me and my brother stond under a papaya tree, which was in a rural place next to our old house, facing a lake.
  • So, from the photo you can see there is a tranquil lake in the background, and a papaya tree, but maybe we were too short at that age, so only part of the trunk inside the photo.
  • At that monent I holding my favourite toy,faced to the trunk and tried to hold it, and my brother smiled to me.
    • Both of us were not focusing on the camera, so it was a natural monent.
  • I like this photo not only because of this, but also unlike the digital camera, it is the only one photo, no other copy any more.

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