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    • A Harmony

    • I don’t stop wondering would we so value summer, would we so enjoy long sunny days, if the wasn’t a period of winter grey short days.
    • If you will see something every day, won’t it satiate?
    • Not by chance a harmony is a balance between light and dark, day and night, major and minor, between work and relax.
  • I had a long bus journey today.
    • I went to the concert of baroque music in ruins of an old church.
    • But it’s not the concert, what I want to share with you now, although the concert was perfect and certainly exactly it put me to this thoughts.
    • I’m about the road to it and back.
  • I enjoyed this road so much.
    • All around - fields, forests, rivers , all is full of strength, all around is so green, so bright, the summer how it is, the summer which has come into its own.
    • The evening rays illuminate it especially cool I thought, but on the way back, after the sunset already, after 10 p.m, it was also great.
    • The cleanest sky with a light blue strip and the horizon colored by sunsets rays made a special atmosphere.
    • Fog over rivers and fields , sometimes stretching like a thin thread, sometimes spreading like a whole sea , it add the magic to the picture, perfect even without it , but all together...how pity that there is no words to express it.
    • So back to the start, would I enjoyed by it all so much if I live through it more often?
    • I guess not, and theory of harmony says the same.
    • But how yet disgusting is short cold winter days.
    • Anyway thanks to those days for that I can feel such climb now. Best wishes

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    • I don’t stop wondering would we so value summer, would we so enjoy long sunny days, if the wasn’t a period of winter grey short days.
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    • I don’t stop wondering would we so value summer, would we soif we would value summer days or whether we would enjoy such long sunny days, if the wasre weren’t a period of winter grey shortshort grey winter days.
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    • Not by chance a harmony is a balance between light and dark, day and night, major and minor, between work and relax.
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    • Not by chance ais harmony is a balance between light and dark, day and night, major and minor, betweenor work and relaxation.
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    • But it’s not the concert, what I want to share with you now, although the concert was perfect and certainly exactly it put me to this thoughts.
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    • But it’s not the concert, whatich I want to share with you now, although the concerit was perfect and certainly exactly it put me to this thoughtslead me to these thoughts which I'm sharing with you right now.
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    • All around - fields, forests, rivers , all is full of strength, all around is so green, so bright, the summer how it is, the summer which has come into its own.
      투표하세요!
    • All around -me - the fields, forests, and rivers , a. All is full of strength, all around is so green, so bright, the summer how it is, the summer which has come into its own.
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    • The evening rays illuminate it especially cool I thought, but on the way back, after the sunset already, after 10 p.m, it was also great.
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    • The evening rays illuminate it especially coolin a cool shade I thought, but on the way back, after the sunset has already set, after 10 p.m, it was also great.
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    • The cleanest sky with a light blue strip and the horizon colored by sunsets rays made a special atmosphere.
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    • The cleanest sky with a light blue strip and the horizon colored by sunsets rays made for a special atmosphere.
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    • Fog over rivers and fields , sometimes stretching like a thin thread, sometimes spreading like a whole sea , it add the magic to the picture, perfect even without it , but all together...how pity that there is no words to express it.
      투표하세요!
    • Fog over rivers and fields , sometimes stretching like a thin thread, sometimes spreading like a whole sea , it adds to the magic to, the picture, perfect even without it this, but all together...how such a pity that there is no words towords cannot even express it.
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