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Сообщение от Jenniee111 - English

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  • No, I disagree with this point of view.
    • For my perspective, keeping a good balance between human needs and environment preservation is very important.
    • First, human needs are supported by the natural resource.
    • We live in the same earth, and our interests is interrelated, these mean that it is important for us to ensure the sustainability development between human and environment.
    • Second, human-made promotes a better environment.
    • Theoratically, many researchers are dedicating to combine the green development with many research field.
    • Practically, many research models have been applied into industries and obtained a good yield for both company profit and environment quality.
    • Therefore, maintaining a banlance between human needs and environment preservation is important and can be come ture from both theory and practice aspects.

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English