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    • Meeting up my new boss

    • The last week was my first week in my new job.
    • I’m work at a big building in the center of the city on the financial area to settle some troubles about costs.
    • Some weeks ago I was worried with the quality of my work to help the company, but at the meantime I was very excited and pround to me to be accepted.
    • My new boss, Maggie, is an admirable person, but the only thing that I don’t like it’s when she appers suddenly to check our work!

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    • I’m work at a big building in the center of the city on the financial area to settle some troubles about costs.
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    • I’m work ating in a big building in the centere of the city oin the financial area (to settle some troubles about costs <--- a specific area of accounting? This is not clear enough..).
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    • Some weeks ago I was worried with the quality of my work to help the company, but at the meantime I was very excited and pround to me to be accepted.
      투표하세요!
    • Some weeks ago I was worried withabout the quality of my work to helpwith the company, but atin the meantime I was very excited and pround to me d to be accepted.
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    • My new boss, Maggie, is an admirable person, but the only thing that I don’t like it’s when she appers suddenly to check our work!
      투표하세요!
    • My new boss, Maggie, is an admirable person, but the only thing that I don’t like it’s when she appers suddenly appears to check our work! ¶
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