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  • Alexandra. A science fiction story. Part IV

    • It takes a lot of time to accelerate–three days in fact, several hours to enter and exit hyperspace and several days to decelerate and dock at the next station.
  • There are robots ready to unload and load everything you need.
    • But negotiations with the control room, filling out declarations, and the legal subtleties of paperwork–all this is on me.
  • The on-board AI can certainly handle all this on its own.
  • Low priority cargo, for instance, is transported automatically.
  • However, in some cases, humans, despite their cognitive distortions and weaknesses, with all their imperfections, are preferable.
  • Robots and protocols are a good thing.
    • Nevertheless, when somebody’s have a couple of drinks in the company of the right people, as result the priority level оf your board will be increased, and you will not have to stand in queues, and you will receive fuel of the same price category, but of better quality.
  • It is human nature after all.
  • The human factor, so to speak.

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    • It takes a lot of time to accelerate–three days in fact, several hours to enter and exit hyperspace and several days to decelerate and dock at the next station.
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    • It takes a lot of time to accelerate - three days in fact,: several hours to enter and exit hyperspace andthen several more days to decelerate and dock at the next station.
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    • But negotiations with the control room, filling out declarations, and the legal subtleties of paperwork–all this is on me.
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    • But negotiations with the control room, filling out declarations, and the legal subtleties of paperwork - all this is on me.
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    • However, in some cases, humans, despite their cognitive distortions and weaknesses, with all their imperfections, are preferable.
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    • Nevertheless, when somebody’s have a couple of drinks in the company of the right people, as result the priority level оf your board will be increased, and you will not have to stand in queues, and you will receive fuel of the same price category, but of better quality.
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    • Nevertheless, when somebody’s haved a couple of drinks in the company of the right people then, as result the priority level оf your board willould be increased, and you will. You would not have to stand in queues, and you willould receive fuel of the same price category, but of better quality.
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