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    • Advantages and Disavantages of shopping online

    • The technology advances change the business format of the world, once several companies included the online format of sales, provinding to the customers the option of shopping from their houses, or any places.
    • The biggest advantage of shopping online is the praticality of choose the product and pay for it minutes or in second depending of the service.
    • This mode of shopping take off the necessity of spending hours driving to the stores, facing queues, and wating for atendiment.
    • Although, there is some negative points of buy things online.
    • The mainly problem is the security.
    • The hakers can clone the sites, and when the customer is looking for the product or searching prices can enter the wrong link which can send the client to the unofficial website.
    • Then, if the person buy the product the harkers will robber their dates, the money spend in the false product and cloned their card.
    • This happend often, and there is alot of people victm of this.
    • Other problem of security of the companies sites is the risck of make a purchase and the item don’t be delivered, lost in the way or the intem delivered be the wrong one.
    • Sometimes, the stores accept the exchamge but sometimes not.
    • Exist many ways of to be prejudice in the act of shopping online.
    • But, this just happened with the ones who don’t be carrfully.
    • When you verify all the signs of a trust site, which is easy, will just have advantages of shopping virtually.

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    • The technology advances change the business format of the world, once several companies included the online format of sales, provinding to the customers the option of shopping from their houses, or any places.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The advances of technology advanceshave changed the business format of the world, once several. Many companies now included the online format of shopping/sales, provinding to the customers the option of shopping from their housmes, or any other places.
    • The technologyical advances have change thed how business format of the world,is conducted worldwide. This happened once several companies included the online sales format of sales, provinding to the customers the option of shopping from their houses, or any placehome or other places. Other companies followed in doing this.
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    • The biggest advantage of shopping online is the praticality of choose the product and pay for it minutes or in second depending of the service.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The biggest advantage of shopping online is the practicality of chooseing the product and paying for it within minutes or in second s (depending ofn the service).
    • The biggest advantage of shopping online is the practicality of choose theing a product and then paying for it minutes or ineven a second, depending ofn the service.
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    • This mode of shopping take off the necessity of spending hours driving to the stores, facing queues, and wating for atendiment.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • This mode of shopping take offremoves the necessity of spending hours driving to the stores, facstanding in queues, and waiting for atendimentservice.
    • This mode of shopping take offs away the necessity of spending hours driving to the storeshops, facing queues, and waiting for atendimentto be served.
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    • The hakers can clone the sites, and when the customer is looking for the product or searching prices can enter the wrong link which can send the client to the unofficial website.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The haHackers can clone the websites, and w. When the customer is looking for the product or searching for prices can, he/she could enter the wrong link, which canwould send the clientustomer to the unofficialfake website.
    • The haHackers can clone the sites, and wsites. If this happens then twhen a customer is looking for thea product or searching prices can enter the wrong link which can send the client to the unofficial, that person might/could click on a different link to the one they think they are clicking on. This in turn could/might send this customer to a fake website.
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    • Then, if the person buy the product the harkers will robber their dates, the money spend in the false product and cloned their card.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Then, if the personcustomer tries to buy the product, the harckers will robber their dates,steal the money spend it on the false product and cloned their credit card.
    • Then, if the personat customer attempts to buy thea product, then harckers will robbercould steal their dates,a and the money spend it on theat falske product and. They might also cloned theiris customer’s credit or debit card.
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    • Other problem of security of the companies sites is the risck of make a purchase and the item don’t be delivered, lost in the way or the intem delivered be the wrong one.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • OAnother problem of security of the companies sitesface is the risck of makecustomers making a purchase and the item don’not being delivered, lost in the way or the intemduring delivery or delivered be the wrong oneaddress.
    • OAnother problem of security of the companies sitessecurity problem for companies selling on internet is the risck of makea customer making a purchase andthen theis item don’either not being delivered, lost inalong the way or the intembeing delivered be the wrong oneto an incorrect address.
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