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  • An essay about fair-weather friends

    • Due to the fact that humans are basically social creatures, they almost cannot depend only upon their own capabilities, and they need to have cooperation with others to fulfill their accomplishments.
    • The path of life can be facilitated if people are in interactivity with their true friends.
    • In opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions being supportive and caring only if all the situation is going smoothly and unproblematically.
    • They have embarked upon the partnership with only the aim of exploitation the relationship for their own advantages, and when a problem or severe adversity happens to their mates, they disappear swiftly in order no to be affected by the issue.
  • Therefore, they are not reliable at all, and under no circumstances should this companionship persist.
    • The discernment of such so-called friends can sometimes be sophisticated, since they often have wisely planned the condition in advance, and they are more alert to the case than the friendship victims, so they can not be easily identified.
    • The solution may be more investigation or examination prior to commencement of a friendship as to whether they are worth being in contact.
    • Even by adopting this approach, like marriage, friend-choosing process is always an unknown quantity.
    • All in all, human generation may have the need for trusting their friends and share their success and sorrow with them, but some cunning unreal friends are likely to be wrongly chosen.
  • Some screening practices may be helpful, although they are not practical in all cases.

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  • Titel
  • Satz 1
    • Due to the fact that humans are basically social creatures, they almost cannot depend only upon their own capabilities, and they need to have cooperation with others to fulfill their accomplishments.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Due to the fact that humans are basically social creatures, they almostgenerally cannot depend only upon their ¶
      own capabilities,
      and theybut need to have cooperatione with others to fulfill their accomplishmentneeds.
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  • Satz 2
  • Satz 3
    • In opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions being supportive and caring only if all the situation is going smoothly and unproblematically.
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    • InAs opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions beingwho are supportive and caring only ¶
      if
      all the situationeverything is going smoothly and unproblematicallywithout problems.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3
  • Satz 4
    • They have embarked upon the partnership with only the aim of exploitation the relationship for their own advantages, and when a problem or severe adversity happens to their mates, they disappear swiftly in order no to be affected by the issue.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • They have embarked upon the partnership ¶
      with only the aim of exploit
      ationing the relationship for their own advantages, and when a problem or severe ¶
      adversity
      happens to their matesoccurs for their companion, they disappear swiftly in order not to be affected by the issue.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4
  • Satz 5
  • Satz 6
    • The discernment of such so-called friends can sometimes be sophisticated, since they often have wisely planned the condition in advance, and they are more alert to the case than the friendship victims, so they can not be easily identified.
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    • The discernment of such so-called friends can sometimes be sophisticateddifficult, since they often have wisecleverly ¶
      planned the condition
      s in advance, and they are more alert to the case than the friendship victims, so they ¶
      can
      ware of the deception than the targeted friend, so that they ¶
      will
      not be easily identified.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6
  • Satz 7
    • The solution may be more investigation or examination prior to commencement of a friendship as to whether they are worth being in contact.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • The solution may brequire more investigation or examination prior to
      the commencement of a friendship as to whether they are worth being in contact.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7
  • Satz 8
  • Satz 9
    • All in all, human generation may have the need for trusting their friends and share their success and sorrow with them, but some cunning unreal friends are likely to be wrongly chosen.
      50% GOOD (2 votes)
    • All in all, human generation may havdespite the need for trusting theirone's friends and share theiring one's successes and
      sorrows with them, but some cunning unreal friends are likely to be wrongly chosenthere remains the risk of choosing cunning and deceitful companions.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 9Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 9
  • Satz 10