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  • Fantastic September

    • Today is the last day of warm, which coincided with the end of September.
  • This year the first month of autumn was the best month of the whole summer.
    • Also it was the warmest September ever - average temperature of the month was more than 17° C.
    • The day temperatures often were more than 23° C.
    • I swam comfortably the whole month - the water still about 18° C.
  • It’s really something incredible for this period.
    • I understand, of course, that it’s actually the result of world climate catastrophe, but for me it’s quite pleasant changes.
    • I was happy by its September more than any other summer month - when you aren’t expecting much warm and it falls on your head, you are especially happy and thankful.
  • This month beat about 6 daily temperature records!
    • The most part of this great month I was on my vacation.
    • It was the best choice - I caught as much clear warm days, without strong winds and rains as I couldn’t find in a row during any other month.
    • Now I’m almost ready to meet autumn ”and forests dressed in gold” as Pushin said.
    • I’m just wondering how long my wetsuit will be able to resist the autumn and will I see trees in red and yellow costumes from the water...

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