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- Help to correect my sentence please?! Thank You:)
- so here my sentences which are these, " My old body back in 2010 , ughh i really cannot wait my high school to be over so that i can lose my weight so badly "

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- so here my sentences which are these, " My old body back in 2010 , ughh i really cannot wait my high school to be over so that i can lose my weight so badly "
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- sSo here is my sentence~~s which are these, " M~~:¶"With my old body back in 2010 , ~~ughh i~~I really c~~anno~~ouldn't wait myfor high school to be over so ~~that i can lose my weight so badly~~ I could start losing weight."
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