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  • Science

  • Last year i got a scholarship.
    • I started to do research in the botanic area, with suculents.
    • I´ve always loved science, when I was a kid science were my favorite subject, It was so interesting to learn how things actually worked.
    • But then I went to sixth grade, everything changed, It turned out that I couldn´t understand science anymore, nothing were making sense, I started to learn botanic, and I couln´t understand anything about it, the subject that I´ve always had loved became the one that I hated the most.
    • As the years went by I found myself at science again, I couldn´t run away from the thing that i´ve always loved.
    • I gave a second chance for it, I over came my difficults, I gave all of my blood and tears for it.
    • Last year I knew that all of my hard work from the past years were all worth it, I won a biotecnolagy olimpiad, and with that, I received a scholarship to study and make research in the Succulent morphology area.
    • Since a kid, I hated botanic, and plants in general, and now I work with them, all of my life is around plants, they are my working instrument, how controversial that is, isn’t it.
    • But know, I kinda like to study them, I can´t lie, they are pretty cool.
    • I hope that in a near future I can started my medical degree, and study what I really loveI, and since had loved.
    • You know, science can be difficult and pretty hard sometimes, but it´s wonderfull, it always have the answear to our questions, and if it dosent have, we can go find it.

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    • I´ve always loved science, when I was a kid science were my favorite subject, It was so interesting to learn how things actually worked.
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    • I´ve always loved science, when I was a kid science wereas my favorite subject, Iit was so interesting to learn how things actually worked.
    • I´ve always loved science, w. When I was a kid science were, it was my favorite subject,. It was so interesting to learn about how things actually worked.
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    • But then I went to sixth grade, everything changed, It turned out that I couldn´t understand science anymore, nothing were making sense, I started to learn botanic, and I couln´t understand anything about it, the subject that I´ve always had loved became the one that I hated the most.
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    • But then I went to sixth grade, everything changed, Iit turned out that I couldn´t understand science anymore, nothing were makingmade sense, I started to learn botanicy, and I couldn´t understand anything about it, the subject that I´ve always had loved became the one that I hated the most.
    • But then I went to sixth grade, everything changed,. It turned out that I couldn´'t understand science anymore, because nothing wereas making sense,. I started to learn botanic,y and I couldn't understand anything about it,. the subject that I´ve'd always had loved became the one that I hated the most.
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    • Last year I knew that all of my hard work from the past years were all worth it, I won a biotecnolagy olimpiad, and with that, I received a scholarship to study and make research in the Succulent morphology area.
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    • Last year I knew that all of my hard work from the past years wereas all worth it, I won a biotechnolaogy oliympiad, and with that, I received a scholarship to study and makedo research in the Succulent morphology area.
    • Last year I knew that all of my hard work from the past years were all worth it, I won a biotechnolaogy oOlimpiad, and. with that, I received a scholarship to study and makedo research in the Sfield of succulent morphology area.
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    • Since a kid, I hated botanic, and plants in general, and now I work with them, all of my life is around plants, they are my working instrument, how controversial that is, isn’t it.
      Vote now!
    • Since I was a kid, I hated botanicy, and plants in general, and now I work with them, all of my life is around plants, they are my working instrument, how controversial that is, isn’t it.
    • Since a kid, I hated botanic,y and plants in general, and yet now I work with them, a. All of my life ievolves around plants, t. They are my working instrument, h. How controversial that is, isn’t it.is that?
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    • You know, science can be difficult and pretty hard sometimes, but it´s wonderfull, it always have the answear to our questions, and if it dosent have, we can go find it.
      Vote now!
    • You know, science can be difficult and pretty hard sometimes, but it´s wonderfull, it always haves the answears to our questions, and if it dosen't have them, we can go find ithem.
    • You know, science can be difficult and pretty hard sometimes, but it´'s wonderfull, i. It always have thes answears to our questions, and, if it dosent haveesn't, we can go find ithem.
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