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    • the best hotel I've ever been to is called Hilton hotel 。Hilton hotol is renowned for its spectacular exterior。 It's a five-star hotel and it is situated in LinHexi road of GuangZhou。 One day ，my friends and I went to there because the hotel featured a music show that night。As soon as we arrived there，a upscale music fountain caught our eyes。Actually， we're that kind of students who never ever can afford to live a luxurious hotel like Hilton。 So I was so moved by the music came from the fountain。After entering the door ，we sat down at the lobby to enjoy the show which was held by an Australian singer whose name is Roston Kington。 At the same time， a nice waitress came up to us for serving 。We ordered three cocktails 。After a while ，the singer went down from the stage and had some pleasant talks with us。He is so handsome and approachable。With hospitality，we took some pictures with him in order to keep a good momery。 We didn't go home until 10 o'clock.Anyway, we had fun that night in Hilton Hotel。

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    • the best hotel I've ever been to is called Hilton hotel 。Hilton hotol is renowned for its spectacular exterior。 It's a five-star hotel and it is situated in LinHexi road of GuangZhou。 One day ，my friends and I went to there because the hotel featured a music show that night。As soon as we arrived there，a upscale music fountain caught our eyes。Actually， we're that kind of students who never ever can afford to live a luxurious hotel like Hilton。 So I was so moved by the music came from the fountain。After entering the door ，we sat down at the lobby to enjoy the show which was held by an Australian singer whose name is Roston Kington。 At the same time， a nice waitress came up to us for serving 。We ordered three cocktails 。After a while ，the singer went down from the stage and had some pleasant talks with us。He is so handsome and approachable。With hospitality，we took some pictures with him in order to keep a good momery。 We didn't go home until 10 o'clock.Anyway, we had fun that night in Hilton Hotel。
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    • the best hotel I've ever been to is called Hilton hotel 。Hilton hotoel is renowned for its spectacular exterior。 It's a five-star hotel and it is situated in LinHexi road of GuangZhou。¶One day ，my friends and I went to there because the hotel featured a music show that night。As soon as we arrived there，an upscale music fountain caught our eyes。Actually， we're thate kind of students who could never ever can afford to livestay in a luxurious hotel like Hilton。 So I was so moved by the music that came from the fountain。After entering the door ，we sat down at the lobby to enjoy the show which was held by an Australian singer whose name is Roston Kington。 At the same time， a nice waitress came up to us for servingto serve us 。We ordered three cocktails 。After a while ，the singer went down from the stage and had some pleasant talks with us。He is so handsome and approachable。With hospitality，we took some pictures with him in order to keep a good momeemory。 We didn't go home until 10 o'clock.Anyway, we had fun that night in Hilton Hotel。
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    • tThe best hotel I've ever been to is called Hilton hotel 。Hilton hotol is renowned for its spectacular exterior。 It's a five-star hotel and it is situated in LinHexi road of GuangZhou。¶One day the Hilton Hotel. It's a five-star hotel at LinHexi, GuangZhou, known for its spectacular architecture. ¶One night，my friends and I went to there because the hotel was featureding a music show. that night。As soon as we arrived there，a upscale, a music fountain caught our eyes。. Actually，, we're thate kind of students who never can never can afford to live in a luxurious hotel like Hilton。 So . ¶I was so moved by the music came from the fountain。After. Upon entering the door ，we sat down atin the lobby to enjoy the show which was held by anfeatured Australian singer whose name is Roston Kington。. At the same time，, a nice waitress came up to us for serving 。Wand we ordered three cocktails. 。After a while ，the singer went down from the stage and had some pleasant talksspoke with us。. He iwas so handsome and approachable。Wi. Being the hospitalityble people that we are，we took some pictures with him in order to keep a good momery。. We didn't go home until 10 o'clock. Anyway, we had fun that night inat Hilton Hotel。.
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