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  • Hey there!
  • My name was Bob and I was excited to live on your planet.
  • One day I had a friend, James.
    • He picked me up in the street, washed and petted.
    • I grew up on his eyes and James was extremely glad to see me grow.
    • When I was big enough he called me Bob.
  • James used to take me with him everywhere and I enjoyed his sweet voice.
    • James taught me fly and every time he let me go I flew high in the sky.
  • I could see James’ look accompanying me from the ground and his mood brightening up.
  • I was happy too.
    • As I was lifting I saw treetops get closer to me, then as I flew pass them, the world was becoming smaller and James seemed to be a tiny ant.
  • I admired the scenery.
  • As I descended, James tenderly embraced me with both of his arms.
  • I felt as if I took pros from Earth and Heaven .
  • However, nothing lasts forever and my happy life wasn’t an exception.
    • One beautiful morning when the sun was high above the horizon James jumped into his clothes , gently grabbed me in his hands and gaily hopped outside.
  • Suddenly, I saw another boy rushing after James.
  • The youngster was excited to see me for I was iridescent with different colours and he tried to take me away.
  • James wasn’t happy about that at all, and he didn’t want to give me to that small fry.
  • The young lad, though, didn’t calm down and he hit me each time with a stronger blow.
  • Albeit, I couldn’t resist and I blasted.
  • James burst into tears as he saw me small again.
  • ”Don’t cry, James, please don’t cry, my friend” - I was transmitting into his head.
  • ”I was the first bright moment in your life, of thousands ahead! ”

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