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  • Money 1

    • My attitude to money changed last time.
    • Earlier, I was a saver.
    • I thought, it’s very important to save money for a rainy day.
    • I didn’t buy expensive things and I always tried to have a cash in bank.
  • Now, I put money aside.
    • I’m sure, every person must have an emergency fund.
    • But my attitude to money is lighter.
    • Our life isn’t stable, we don’t know, what the next day will bring us.
    • So, I spend money with pleasure.
  • I go to the restaurant, I travel sometimes, I buy useful things.
  • I’m not crazy about shopping like a lot of women.
    • As for me, it’s boring to buy clothes and food.
    • Fortunately, I can buy on the internet.
  • I think this possibility is practical.
  • Sometimes, I give some money to charities.
  • Many people need our help.
  • I never help the kids.
    • I know that people usually help a child, but many adults often need more.
  • I have health problems.
  • I communicate with people who are just as sick, and I know that nobody helps them.

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