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Missing days.
Somewhere deep in my heart l desire to go back in time and become a kid again.
I miss those days when i was innocent, carefree and free spirited .There was no stress, no tension, no pressures and no expectations.
My world was free from gossips, manipulations and backstabbing.
That was the time when I didn’t know what words like jealousy, hatred and racism meant.
That was a time when I had faith in people whom I called friends

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- Somewhere deep in my heart l desire to go back in time and become a kid again.
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- I miss those days when i was innocent, carefree and free spirited .There was no stress, no tension, no pressures and no expectations.
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- My world was free from gossips, manipulations and backstabbing.
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- That was the time when I didn’t know what words like jealousy, hatred and racism meant.
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- That was a time when I had faith in people whom I called friends
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