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    • Guys, make me a favour to check my paragraph about bullying

  • Nowadays, humanity is suffering from two horrendous diseases, namely violence and vandalism.
    • Thousands of students are bullied in schools, and hundreds of public places are damaged, because of vandalists.
    • Some people can say that this problem is overrated and is not so serious and threatening, but if a problem hasn’t touched you yet, it doesn’t mean it won’t do that soon.
  • But what can people do to solve this problem?
  • I think that the main changes and acts must be done in the spheres of education and legislation.
    • Educational institutions have to create some anti-violence and anti-bullying organisations or groups, which will share correct messages to the community of students.
    • Besides, a lack of different activities is the main reason for involving pupils in vandalism.
    • And bullying, in its turn, is the result of a bad upbringing and undeveloped communication skills.
    • Nevertheless, the methods which were written above will work to fix these problems in future, so for avoiding vandalism and bullying right now the government have to punish stricter and harder.
    • Putting CCTV cameras also helps to prevent crimes and to figure out the culprits.
    • In this manner, every one of us can help to avoid bullying and vandalism, so if you see that such events happen around you, then don’t stay at the side and help do everything possible for making our society better.

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    • Some people can say that this problem is overrated and is not so serious and threatening, but if a problem hasn’t touched you yet, it doesn’t mean it won’t do that soon.
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    • Some people can say that this problem is overrated and is not so serious and threatening, but if. But just because a problem hasn’t touched you yet, it doesn’t mean it won’t do thathappen soon.
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    • Educational institutions have to create some anti-violence and anti-bullying organisations or groups, which will share correct messages to the community of students.
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    • Educational institutions have to create some anti-violence and anti-bullying organisations or groups, which willould share correct messages to the community of studentinformation to student communities.
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    • Nevertheless, the methods which were written above will work to fix these problems in future, so for avoiding vandalism and bullying right now the government have to punish stricter and harder.
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    • Nevertheless, the methods which were written above willould work to fix these problems in future, so for. So, to avoiding vandalism and bullying right nowas it exists presently, the government haves to punish more stricter and harderly.
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    • In this manner, every one of us can help to avoid bullying and vandalism, so if you see that such events happen around you, then don’t stay at the side and help do everything possible for making our society better.
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    • In this manner, every one of us can help to avoid bullying and vandalism, so i. If you see that such events happening around you, then don’t stay at the side and help not remain passive. Help to do everything possible for making our society better.
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