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  • Shopping

    • Hello!I'm Yancy.
  • Affected by the movie called Confessions of A Shopaholic, I quite like shopping You know, a store can awaken a lust for things that you never know you needed.When your fingers grasp those shiny, new clothes, oh, yes, that's great.
    • Usually I'm not going to shop clothes on the Internet.But I like shopping books on the Net cos they're much cheaper than they're sold in physical stores.
    • Most of clothes I bought from the Internet are in bad quality and the staffs showed on the pictures are different from the real ones,which lets you down.
    • My favorite store is Zara,which is the flagship chain store of Inditex Group owed by Spanish tycoon Amancio Ortega.
  • The clothes in that store is a little expensive for me now.
    • But if I had a job then I can afford it.
    • The point is the quality is worth the price and their styles match their colours ,which makes them fashionable.
    • The last thing I like about shopping is that I can't afford what I want 。 Actually，in GuangZhou ，the most popular place to shop is Teemall and ZhenJia Square。 Do you like shopping?If you do , talk about it.

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  • Vakya 2
    • Affected by the movie called Confessions of A Shopaholic, I quite like shopping You know, a store can awaken a lust for things that you never know you needed.When your fingers grasp those shiny, new clothes, oh, yes, that's great.
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    • Usually I'm not going to shop clothes on the Internet.But I like shopping books on the Net cos they're much cheaper than they're sold in physical stores.
      Vote now!
    • Usually I'm not going to shop do not buy clothes on the Iinternet.B, but I like shoppbuying books on the Net cosinternet because they're much cheaper than they' are sold inin the physical stores.
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    • Most of clothes I bought from the Internet are in bad quality and the staffs showed on the pictures are different from the real ones,which lets you down.
      Vote now!
    • Most of the clothes that I bought from the Iinternet are inhad bad quality and the stauffs showed oin the pictures arewas different from the real oneitems, which lets you down.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
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    • My favorite store is Zara,which is the flagship chain store of Inditex Group owed by Spanish tycoon Amancio Ortega.
      Vote now!
    • My favourite store is Zara, which is the flagship chain store of Inditex Group owned by Spanish tycoon, Amancio Ortega.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
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    • The point is the quality is worth the price and their styles match their colours ,which makes them fashionable.
      Vote now!
    • The point is that the quality is worths the price and their styles matches their colours , which makes them fashionable.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8
  • Vakya 9
    • The last thing I like about shopping is that I can't afford what I want 。 Actually，in GuangZhou ，the most popular place to shop is Teemall and ZhenJia Square。 Do you like shopping?If you do , talk about it.
      Vote now!
    • The last thing I like about shopping is that I can't afford what I want 。.¶Actually，, in GuangZhou, ，the most popular place to shop is Teemall and ZhenJia Square。. Do you like shopping? If you do , talkell me about it.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9