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- That’s my day today
- Today i wake up in the morning at 7:00 o’clock.
- I had a bad nigth, sick since yesterday.
So, i just went out of the bed out of count and tired.
During the morning my day became better ’cause i started to talk with my friends and it’s made me fell more happy and full of energy.
Now it’s time to improve english skills.
I hope us have a great night!

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- That’s my day today
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- Th~~at’~~is was my day today
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- Today i wake up in the morning at 7:00 o’clock.
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- Today iI waoke up ~~in the morning~~ at 7:00 o’clock in the morning.
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- I had a bad nigth, sick since yesterday.
  투표하세요!
- I had a bad nig~~th,~~ht, been sick since yesterday.
  LyndiEv4Lyfe 댓글 1
  
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- So, i just went out of the bed out of count and tired.
  투표하세요!
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- During the morning my day became better ’cause i started to talk with my friends and it’s made me fell more happy and full of energy.
  투표하세요!
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- Now it’s time to improve english skills.
  투표하세요!
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- I hope us have a great night!
  투표하세요!
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