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Text from EmersonAlves - English

    • my first day on vacation

    • Finally Im in on my vacation, i reserved the morning to just stay lay on my bad.
    • After lunch I call to the orthopedic clinic to see about my index finger, it was broken cause I fall while I road on my motocycle.
    • I knowed a new song by Olivia Rodrigo - vampire, I’m addicted on this song, I know that ís not the most mascle song of 2023, but the scaling bring a good sensation while I hear this music and bring to me also a kind of sense of reward.
    • today i also went see my daughter, I take her on the park that stay near at her grandmather’s house.
    • After she play.
    • We passed an supermarket to buy somethings to she eat.
    • So, after it all, I take she back on your grandmother’s house.

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