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Text from ChloeNguyen - English

  • My dream job

  • Hi there!
  • Welcome to my speech. How are you?
  • Are you feeling great with your jobs?
  • Unfortunately, I’m not, now I’m in grade 11 so I think about my job recently.
  • Actually, I don’t have my dream job and find it was too hard for me, that was a big problem.
  • Otherwise, I’ll go aboard to America but if you think that so lucky, you are wrong.
  • I want to go there as soon as possible because my English is not well, reading, speaking, listening, writing are not good at all and I think go there could fix my problems.
  • I have to fall in line with American atmosphere, so that I should study better.
    • I wanna be a dentist, actually that was not my dream job but it will make a lot of money.
  • So that, I think dentist is the best choice for me.

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