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  • My Lost Paradise

    • A couple of years ago I acquired my small piece of land - quiet, immersed in greenery, uncrowded place not far from seaside town.
    • Actually it is a place for growing plants, vegetable, fruit trees and so on, which in Russia called dacha.
    • Half of land plots here were abandoned for many years.
    • This way three adjacent to my plot were thickets of tall trees and shrubs.
    • I had neighbour just from one side - an old women, who appears time to time for a couple of hours.
    • So almost all the time I was face to face only to nature.
    • Now the situation changed.
    • The place is becoming popular, cause it’s near the sea and the sea now is in trend here.
    • A plot behind mine were sold in this spring for very high for it price, despite that it was empty for 30 years and was full of wild vegetation.
    • I afraid that other land plots also will be sale one day.
    • My small peace of paradise, that is pronounced like Rye in Russian, with live bird music under open sky, silence and privacy won’t be the same.
    • Soon there will be a fence with my new neighbours, I guess un ugly cheap one.
    • Earlier my place was surrounded only by hedge, which harmonizes perfectly with nature...
    • Yeah, it’s a scream of soul for my lost Rye (paradise).

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    • A couple of years ago I acquired my small piece of land - quiet, immersed in greenery, uncrowded place not far from seaside town.
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    • A couple of years ago I acquired my small piece of land - quiet, immersed in greenery, uncrowded place not far from a seaside town.
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    • A couple of years ago I acquired mya small piece of land - quiet, immersed in greenery, an uncrowded place not far from a seaside town.
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    • Actually it is a place for growing plants, vegetable, fruit trees and so on, which in Russia called dacha.
      투표하세요!
    • Actually it is a place for growing plants, vegetables, fruit trees and so on, which in Russia is called a dacha.
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    • Actually it is what in Russian we call a dacha, a place for growing plants, vegetables, fruit trees and so on, which in Russia called dacha.
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    • I had neighbour just from one side - an old women, who appears time to time for a couple of hours.
      투표하세요!
    • I had neighbour just fromon one side - an old women, who appears from time to time for a couple of hours.
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    • I only had a neighbour just fromon one side - an old women, who would appears from time to time for a couple of hours.
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    • A plot behind mine were sold in this spring for very high for it price, despite that it was empty for 30 years and was full of wild vegetation.
      투표하세요!
    • A plot behind mine were sold in this spring for a very high for it price, despite that it wasit being empty for 30 years and wasbeing full of wild vegetation.
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    • A plot behind mine wereas sold in this spring for a very high for it price, despite that it wase fact that it had been empty for 30 years and was full of wild vegetationovergrown with weeds.
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    • My small peace of paradise, that is pronounced like Rye in Russian, with live bird music under open sky, silence and privacy won’t be the same.
      투표하세요!
    • My small peace of paradise, that is pronounced like Rye in Russian, with live bird music under open sky, silence and privacy won’t be the same.
    • My small peace of paradise, that is - Rye pronounced like Rye in Russian, with live bird music means paradise - with birds singing under the open sky, silence and privacy won’t be the same.
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    • My small peace of paradise, that is pronounced like Rye in Russian, with live bird musicIt’s my little piece of paradise - which in Russian sounds like Rye - with birds singing under the open sky,ies. There won’t be the same silence and privacy won’t be the samthere.
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