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    • Does The Fame Bring Happiness?

  • In fact, I saw this title on this website before.
    • Someone on this website has written about the fame in the correction section.
  • I enjoyed this subject.
    • So, I also decided to write a short article about the fame to remember words regarding it.
    • I think that the fame has advantages and disadvantages.
    • In the beginning, maybe it’s a good thing in the life of famous people.
  • But later, it may turn into misfortune and disaster.
    • If we want to talk about advantages of the fame, firstly we can say that the money comes at the top of the list.
    • Secondly, normal people show their interest in famous people a lot.
    • Thirdly, the famous people have a lot of opportunities because of the fame.
    • Of course, these opportunities make their life easier, compared to the normal people.
  • Therefore, maybe many people want to be famous.
    • Nowadays, we can see this effort on the social media platforms.
    • On the other hand, if we want to look at disadvantages of the fame, we can say that some famous people don’t have any privacy because of the fame.
    • Secondly, when a famous person makes a mistake, people insult his/her immediately.
  • Thirdly, the media always follows famous people wherever they go.
  • So, a lot of problems usually happen between famous people and the media.
    • In this context, the fame is like a weapon that the famous person must know how to use it in his/her life.
    • If he/she uses it correctly, there won’t be any problem.
    • In this case, the fame can bring happiness.
    • But if he/she uses it incorrectly, definitely there will happen many problems.
    • In this case, the fame can bring a lot of tedious and annoying things.
    • In conclusion, we can say that the fame has advantages and disadvantages.
    • Thus, the famous people must always know and remember this reality to use it correctly in their lives.

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