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Text from JSerge - English

  • English language

    • Once In bright summer day I and my parents went to the zoo.
    • It was not far away from our house, so we got there on bikes.
    • Then we bought a tickets, we went to see the animals.
    • There were many animals from every places of our beautiful world.
  • I was walking by the road and looking at the lions and camels.
    • In the over part of zoo there was a bear.
  • I also saw a wolf, a fox, a rabbit, a deer, an ox and many other interesting creatures.
    • My favorite part was when we came to bird section.
  • There first I saw a big fluffy owl.
    • It was staring at me with it’s a large black eyes.
  • Next, we saw a big colorful parrot. He could talk.
  • These two birds were very funny for me.
  • I also saw a pink flamingo.
    • Pink - is my favorite color, so I liked a bird very much.
  • I remember a penguin, a peacock, a beautiful swan and I took many pictures with these birds.
  • After a walk at the zoo, we were riding a horse.
    • I very liked this part too.
  • This trip to the zoo was fantastic and I will remember it for a long time.

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