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    • Jacintha Saldanha tried to kill herself many times

    • London – Jacintha Saldanha tried to kill herself many times, the nurse who died after answering to a dirty trick phone call from King Edward VII Hospital in London, where Kate Middleton was hospitalised.
    • Two Australian radio speakers pretending to be Queen Elizabeth II and Prince Charles called there and they obtained informations about the Duchess of Cambridge’s health.
    • This is what reveal the Indian press by Sunday Mail.
    • According to the British journal, the Indian woman 46 years-old, tried to kill herself the first time last December with an overdose of pills, while she was travelling in India with her family.
    • She survived for a miracle, after being in the hospital.
    • Jacintha tried one more time, writes the Mail, nine days after, it would seem falling down from a building.
  • She had been hospitalised and submitted to an intensive therapy.
    • She received also psychiatric assistance and after that, they prescribed to her antidepressants for nine months.

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    • London – Jacintha Saldanha tried to kill herself many times, the nurse who died after answering to a dirty trick phone call from King Edward VII Hospital in London, where Kate Middleton was hospitalised.
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    • London – Jacintha Saldanha tried to kill herself many times, the nurse who died after answering to a dirty trick phone call fromwhile in King Edward VII Hospital in London, where Kate Middleton was hospitalised, tried to kill herself many times.
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    • Two Australian radio speakers pretending to be Queen Elizabeth II and Prince Charles called there and they obtained informations about the Duchess of Cambridge’s health.
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    • Two Australian radio speakerhosts pretending to be Queen Elizabeth II and Prince Charles called there and they hospital and obtained informations about the Duchess of Cambridge’s health.
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    • According to the British journal, the Indian woman 46 years-old, tried to kill herself the first time last December with an overdose of pills, while she was travelling in India with her family.
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    • According to the British journal, the Indian woman, who was 46 years-old, tried to kill herself for the first time last December with an overdose of pills, while she was travelling in India with her family last December.
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    • Jacintha tried one more time, writes the Mail, nine days after, it would seem falling down from a building.
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    • Jacintha tried one more time, writes the Mail, nine days lafter, it would seem seemingly by falling down from a building.
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    • She received also psychiatric assistance and after that, they prescribed to her antidepressants for nine months.
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    • She also received also psychiatric assistance, and after that, they prescribed to her antidepressants for nine months. ¶
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