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  • task 2

    • In the past, being a celebrity person was very difficult and complicated. nowadays celebrities have been easier and more widespread. in this essay, I will argue that becoming a celebrity person brings more benefits for personality and their country. the reason for that comes from social media and its applications.
    • One significant advantage of being a famous person is enhancing the physical level of lifestyle. one reason for this is to become the owner of your business and earn all profit from your work without sharing it with others.
    • additionally, the celebrity did not need any educational level also the benefits will come to the celebrity person, and his or her family, and will get feedback for their country too. for example, Cristiano Ronaldo one of the most important football fame, lately, he attends to be one member of the best football club in Saudi Arabia which is one of the biggest wealthy countries in the middle east.
    • On the other hand, there is one main disadvantage to becoming famous person, they are becoming less private and covered by social media and their fans all of the time so they need to maintain their habits and lifestyle in a good way. as a result of that, there are a lot of celebrities complaining of psychological problems related to this issues. for example, Sheerin Abd Alwahab who is a famous singer become addicted.
    • In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of being a celebrity or a famous figure outweigh the disadvantages. by contrast, in my opinion, more celebrities benefits, and more celebrities have problems.

Әр сөйлемді дұрыстауға көмектесіңізші - English

  • Тақырыбы
  • Сөйлем 1
    • In the past, being a celebrity person was very difficult and complicated. nowadays celebrities have been easier and more widespread. in this essay, I will argue that becoming a celebrity person brings more benefits for personality and their country. the reason for that comes from social media and its applications.
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    • In the past, being a celebrity person was very difficult and complicated. nNowadays, celebrities have becomen easier and more widespread. iIn this essay, I will argue that becoming a celebrity person brings more benefits foto their personality and their country. tThe reason for that comes from social media and its applications.
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    • In the past, being a celebrity person was very difficult and complicated. nNowadays celebrities have becomen easier and more widespread. iIn this essay, I will argue that becoming a celebrity person brings more benefits foto their personality and their country. tThe reason for that comes from social media and its applications.
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    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1
  • Сөйлем 2
  • Сөйлем 3
    • additionally, the celebrity did not need any educational level also the benefits will come to the celebrity person, and his or her family, and will get feedback for their country too. for example, Cristiano Ronaldo one of the most important football fame, lately, he attends to be one member of the best football club in Saudi Arabia which is one of the biggest wealthy countries in the middle east.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • aAdditionally, the celebrity did not need any educational level also; the benefits will come to the celebrity person, and his or her family, and they will get feedback for their country too. fFor example, Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the most important football fame, lately, he attends to be oners, has lately been one of the members of the best football club in Saudi Arabia, which is one of the biggemost wealthy countries in the mMiddle eEast.
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    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 3Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 3
  • Сөйлем 4
    • On the other hand, there is one main disadvantage to becoming famous person, they are becoming less private and covered by social media and their fans all of the time so they need to maintain their habits and lifestyle in a good way. as a result of that, there are a lot of celebrities complaining of psychological problems related to this issues. for example, Sheerin Abd Alwahab who is a famous singer become addicted.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • On the other hand, there is one main disadvantage to becoming famous person,: they are becoming less private and covered by social media and their fans all of the time, so they need to maintain their habits and lifestyle in a good way. aAs a result of that, there are a lot of celebrities complaining of psychological problems related to thisese issues. fFor example, Sheerin Abd Alwahab, who is a famous singer, becoame addicted.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Пікірі
    • On the other hand, there is one main disadvantage to becoming a famous person, they are becoming less private and covered by social media and their fans all of the time so they need to maintain their habits and lifestyle in a good way. aAs a result of that, there are a lot of celebrities complaining of psychological problems related to this issues. for example, Sheerin Abd Alwahab who is a famous singer become addicted.
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    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 4Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 4
  • Сөйлем 5